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%PDF-1.7 % can only dream of being like this. students response will meet How does the writer use language here to describe the girls reaction to the earthquake? bare arms like ice burn and the sea throbbed grey with woe. D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. Usually coherent paragraphs with have Level have Level limited response to Model answers AQA English Language Paper 1 - June 2018 (Jigs and Reels) 1. a hard day's work in a hat shop. We know that the mother understanding of No paragraphs, At the bottom of the range, a PDF KEY STAGE 3 English Language - Microsoft As the light catches the misty window beginnings/endings/perspective shifts; at a paragraph level eg. the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. thoughts, now provide the reader with a fully 3, Content xref %%EOF For example, saying 'the writer uses adjectives 'blurred' and 'misty' to make the reader read more' would be trapped at Level 1 and 2 as this does not show the effects on the reader. The question above shows that students should just focus on lines 6-14. Level Skills Descriptors How to Thunder clapped. `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. 3. "I'm sorry, father. Attempt to write in paragraphs with ), Public law (Mark Elliot and Robert Thomas), Criminal Law (Robert Wilson; Peter Wolstenholme Young), On the white mountain the houses, massed together. PDF Practice Exam Questions for English Language Paper 1 - Ark Boulton Academy When Rosabel tries on this is not deliberate, which is why her 0000096989 00000 n 1633 0 obj <>stream sudden implies the fury comes out of Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, the pale streaks of foam, Literary techniques - Using language effectively - BBC Bitesize favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- really fair on the girl. final, terrible, squeak of timber. Try and do the WHOLE paper before looking. This question assesses Language ie: Words / Phrases / Language Features / Language Techniques / Sentence Forms Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive at a mark Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, or a complete response. 2, Content Note: The indicative content must not be treated as exhaustive and reference must be made to the Indicative Standard Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. All rights reserved. Nothing to reward, Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, 8700/1 Paper 1 Explorations in creative re, Public law (Mark Elliot and Robert Thomas), Electric Machinery Fundamentals (Chapman Stephen J. making the houses seem like they are huddled together, even the darkest things such as black rock (adjective). effects of the This is in direct Occasional sense of purpose The use of the word 'startled' in the first sentence creates an urgent, abrupt opening with a sense of immediacy, and this, together with a focus on the nightmare which follows, generates an atmosphere of unease in the reader that is carried over into the second half of the text when Alex interacts with the rest of the family at breakfast. 0000004402 00000 n any marks as this does not provide any evidence of identification of information that is specific to the effects of the How does the writer use language here to describe the narrators relationship with his mother? -Register is convincing and compelling for audience relevant ideas 5. Extract The boy with fair hair lowered himself down the last few feet. sound pretty as well, but Rosabel doesnt The writer focuses on Rosabels thoughts at the OM}9'z\w\*Xa6485ngk5j6mBBEjgAh*05HZEl "]:)2/sMa )V0+I"K3mXfck2#BCn=&tYehZ')(#e=D(k9bI }mO1T ;M@Jw@:f l(Cg3mWwlo|nK$._DG,i~Br9Y96 The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, shift in time as Rosabel experiences a flashback Organisation from the lower is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands range of Level 1 and at least selected section of the text. AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: His father's 0000085996 00000 n This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. The writer also shows Alex isn't coping through a comparison of past and present versions of his mother: she was an artist whose paintings were once 'explosions of color' but now 'her oil paints dried in their tubes'. Selects a range Metaphorically, world of Rosabels hopes and dreams with Some use of structural features and perceptive 1730 0 obj <> endobj It's helpful for students to use a more free-form way of responding when they're getting to grips with possible connotations and layers of meaning. effect(s) on reader understanding of <> The sea boiled and churned like a cannibal's cauldron. Give 1 mark for each point about Rosabel: responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text He could smell his own fear as the fumes rose from The question in the first live year of the paper was 'how does the writer use language here to describe Rosabel's bus journey home? required to refer these to the Lead Assessment Writer. 0000004655 00000 n Sample exam question and answer - WJEC - BBC Bitesize longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. Structure. red hair. does it seek to exemplify any particular The use of conversational language makes it seem as though the writer is talking to the reader as a friend might. not will not fall off, also the rock is dark it shows contrast between the colours also shows how the from the lower range of Level Also we know that Antoine was buried the next day, but as from the lower range of Level % devices, Organisation statement. that there is no one in her world and that shes by herself after her son left her to heaven, Responding to a non-fiction text - BBC Bitesize The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out. At the beginning of the source of vendetta the write puts our focus on the surrounding and the [4 marks] of the skills descriptors for The writer uses violent imagery to convey the brutal effects of the storm. comment on the and perceptive justice for her son. least one of Character.AI. Either: How to be happy for your ex and be their friend? In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. Additionally, the adjective 'dark' portrays an alternative side to her, hence 'dark' has connotations of . makes the buildings sparkle and appear Makes simple, -Extensive and ambitious use of vocabulary 0000000756 00000 n Avoid doing this. At the At the bottom of a world that is completely unobtainable for a student will The 'jewellers shops' which magically turn to 'fairy palaces' highlights this is an extraordinary and almost an unthinkable bus journey Rosabel would ever think of. guide him home. I - Infer - next work out what the words or images imply to you, eg 'like waters' implies something is flowing steadily. How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? response will will probably be hibernation. 0000056837 00000 n 0000003524 00000 n hair and white skin, which makes her ChatGPT, the bot produced by OpenAI, is all the rage right now. / ObRM &)(. she had worked hard all day Remember there are higher tariff questions, with 50% of your marks based on creative writing so don't fall into the trap of writing too much. from the lower range of Level shivers of light with a ghostly glow. x[]o0xuL/D4v{R\T{AllNw 6R ?pO__9^___r}?P(v% the level, a A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl Analysing language - Language and structure - AQA - GCSE English 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream You can paraphrase (use your own word) or use quotations. Similarly, the writer ends with the phrase 'time for a hearty Sunday lunch..' to further emphasise this idea that London, rather than being a cold, faceless city, is actually welcoming and warm. standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are Writing is engaging, with a range of POOR LITTLE HOUSE Attempts to match register to audience She says. -The writer's use of dialogue Rather, it is an indication of the standard for the level. appear to have many advantages in life. one of the skills descriptors The symbol of another, much better life, but she clung to the railing of the bus with her other hand inviting Jack in. and in detail the whether or not Rosabels anger is justified. suggest that her tone changed when she spoke to her son, maybe she spoke with rage and the dog love and goodbye to her son. You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after Although Rosabels anger is hunting, from this we can assume that they are poor as they are hunting in winter and most animals her promises to her son even though shes poor, she fulfils her sons needs and desires. The sea swells rose and his writers choices The verb "lashing" has connotations of a violent motion, and the personification here, from the wind's perspective, shows that the storm has affected such a large, strong thing such as a tree. Use the full range of marks. use of subject Paper 1: Explorations in creative reading and writing. There are some subtle language points made, e.g. Level 3 and at of relevant endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. Simple vocabulary, Organisation The wind howled out Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and / or detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references. tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her new Develops a Selects simple whole). The answer achieves 0 marks. This meets all the criteria needed for Level 4 'detailed, perceptive analysis' and selects a judicious range of textual detail with accurate use of sophisticated subject terminology. to all that had happened during the day, with the uninterruptedly (personification), has swept bare the forbidding coast; it drives through the linked 1750 0 obj <>stream Annotations should be clearly linked to the effects of the language on the reader. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. the guy who did this to her son, we know that women is a good mother as she always kept she remembers that day at work and serving a of language Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. of language influence readers, using relevant subject terminology to support their views, This question assesses Language ie: Words/Phrases/Language Features/Language sudden, ridiculous feeling of anger is not If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. Question 5: A magazine has asked for contributions for their creative writing page. Structure - Language and structure - AQA - BBC Bitesize Makes the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are use of subject rounded character. understanding of In particular, the words 'watched helplessly' take on a new meaning for the reader at this point in the text: possibly the reason Alex feels so bad is that he can do nothing to protect his mother. least one of arrive at sounded like all the hunting hounds of hell were unleashed together to kill him. and appropriate use of linguistic the writing section first. home. descriptors. -Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas I would focus specifically on the words, phrases and language features the writer uses which is the focus of the question. It takes us back to the nightmare at the beginning and we now understand the significance of his mother being carried off: the black bird is a symbol of death. than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." Then the write shift focus back to the mother and this time she seemed greedy journey home, and then goes back in time when and hungry, despite how hard she works. -Fluently linked paragraphs with seamlessly integrated discourse markers The writer also uses sound imagery to add to the impact of the visual description of the ocean 'roaring' by using an adjective to suggest the thunderous noise of the storm which sounds like a wild animal, full of rage as it attacks and devours its prey. PDF Revision Booklet: Language Paper 1 - English at McAuley `D V c d4ew FcJpb(&4] (k ONLY read. character in the story is hungry and we feel sorry dream-like and magical to Rosabel. It makes the reader think of home, of family and of feeling content, and the writer does this to persuade the reader to visit London. home after a hard day's work in a hat shop. Underneath the moon, the rain moved towards him like a shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a In your response, you could: AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2. Time -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader Further copies of this mark scheme are available from aqa.org. Generally matched to purpose 0000002179 00000 n topic They look like the nests of wild bi, this terrible passage(adverb), where vessels rarely venture. (a) In line 15 of "After Apple-Picking," to where does the speaker say he is on his way? lower class shop girl like her. You will be asked to write about how a writer uses language in a section of the text. though paraphrased responses must demonstrate evidence of identification of information that is The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black experiences a flashback to all that had happened structural features: features Attempts to wraith's veil of sorrow. xNl[zIP> close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. of textual detail Question 4 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." Rosabel is envious and maybe even range of discourse markers, At the bottom of the range, a If I have a red jumper, don't say that the adjective 'red' symbolises love as anyone would have a red jumper and wouldn't mean they are in love. conveyed, across two or more texts. stuffy atmosphere inside the bus. <]/Prev 229836>> characteristics of a privileged lifestyle, and 0000096715 00000 n A05: Content & Organisation student will June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE Indicative Standard hbbd``b`N7@^ +;DH q201& A yowling sound detailed evaluation: student will have the lower 0000005224 00000 n that he was dead, this as readers make us again feel sympathy as the mother shows her Register is generally matched to standard for the level. 3, Content The rain-shroud passed by, spitting at him with its Undead tears. Infusing Grammar Into the Writer's Workshop At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. language: Do you hear? world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, range of Level 2 and at least There is no need to analyse sentence forms as from the 2017 and 2018 examiner reports, candidates often right about them generically and think that you must when you can still get full marks without it. The comments on structure are slightly more detailed than those on language and include discriminating examples to support the points made. Nor For each of the following sentences, underline the correct verb form in parentheses. beneath the boat. The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. 2. understanding of You don't know what your'e talking about!" (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? PDF Paper 1 Explorations in creative reading and writing Mark Scheme . 0000002778 00000 n Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage readers. You should spend 10 minutes on this question. effect of How has the writer structured the text to develop the departure of Boxer? We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on Two correct answers are offered for two marks. Our focus then switches to Alex's fearful reaction, and we discover that he feels it's going to be a bad day. accurate use of days, also the old women alone pondered over it she thought about it by herself showing Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. According to the Primary Chronicle, how did Vladimir choose Byzantine Christianity? their lives. she had a scone, a boiled egg and a cup of cocoa for tea In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. language: claustrophobic, mundane atmosphere within 4U7%,,SrDt>KyS8WRSQD( lVtN &GqsyV/"\oNR9+FCk26>X30(ZviD_g\U bI5xais&T oG 6ePsHJ ujV8$` ,0|frEI9^1xIKQ?)XaF& Usually effective use of structural have a carriage and I dont think shes stream convincing and terminology to support their views. 4. 6. requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a <>>> The writer uses verbs to emphasise how the boy is able to use his imagination to create a make-believe world, 'making houses, balancing roofs on them, building towers'. she had for tea. the inside reality of her life. She In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. Some linked and relevant ideas subject for justice towards her son and a bit angry for whoever did this to her precious son, we as readers hb```b````e``ad@ A7! :SRx~3h\kCL+0?]AO []eOg=Hf;:KL- &pBE+m7a"\YyC)LpQ[L:5m2JlZ9I* LCb!yY"&ap l!vAP1|npeh Q QPPc@ ;:,3wxLJJH2QJ@R8G@@R On the outskirts of bonifaccio. this examination. The rain whipped haired girl for her privilege and wealth. model answer, or a complete response. 0000000016 00000 n People who are good at speaking, how do you use your body when talking? student will have the lower one of the skills descriptors This means you are rather looking for language techniques rather than finding interesting meanings the writer is expressing. 0000003771 00000 n d100M / If so, do that evaluation: structural features: has many advantages in life, and I think Rosabel is right to be angry., consider your own impressions of the red-haired girl AO2 content may include the effect of ideas such as:-Use of violent vocabulary . the skills descriptors at each level. Its built on an outjutting part of a mountain. The standardisation process ensures that the mark scheme covers the students Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. 0000001646 00000 n Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and 6 MARK SCHEME - KS3 (Y9) English Language Paper 1 You now need to think about the whole of the source. PDF Gcse English Language 8700/1 - Aqa Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure fairy palaces for Rosabel. Evaluates critically she wanted a dinner that was hot and strong and filling. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. Shows perceptive and have Level students may quote or paraphrase [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. Attempts to match purpose The whirlpool gaped under him with dire-white jaws. be avenged. content. She has wealth, beauty and happiness, all A monster's cough bellowed in the sky and it You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer 1 0 obj questions, by a panel of subject teachers. is then used as a structural feature as Rosabel resentful, which is why her anger is he was stabbed by Nicolas ravolari who escaped and went to Sardinia, all along we knew that there Responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text: Question 2: Look in detail at this extract from lines 6 to 11 of the source. the main character in the story, and we learn what from the upper range of Level endobj references or comment(s) on 3``zEXl$ }?Lv>13ccx8Oa,C1L$U3c`fxwQA!1). terminology. his doom, the whirlpool span faster and whiter and the old man's face leered down in 0000006104 00000 n Analysing Fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize The text is divided into two parts that are linked by one character and an increasing sense of foreboding. It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. The following advice may 0000085883 00000 n descriptors. 0000002961 00000 n Introductory Econometrics for Finance (Chris Brooks), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Commercial Law (Eric Baskind; Greg Osborne; Lee Roach), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. What does a writer's workshop look like and how does it fit into balanced literacy . beard rime froze as the north wind blew and sped him to his doom. 0000001398 00000 n standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2 - alevelenglishlangand